Brookpaw // Riverclan // Apprentice

[brooktail]

Name:Brookpaw

Clan:Riverclan

Rank:Apprentice

Age:6 moons

Gender:Male

Picture:

Looks:
Small tortoise shell with a very long tail and mossy green eyes. Burnt patch of fur on left shoulder.

Personality:
He's willing to make friends and he won't back away from a fight. He really wants to become a warrior and maybe even deputy. You can't discourage him easily too. He's scared easily though even if he won't back of. No matter how sad you are, he'll find a way to cheer you up.

History:
Born in a wheelbarrow by a railroad stain. Father materially disappeared. He and his mother went to search for him. Brookpaw got detracted and walked off. Was found and brought to an animal shelter. Played with the manager's daughter every weekend. Fire started and Brookpaw narrowly escaped to join the forest cats.

Paw Print:
Small one???

Fav Thing To Do:

Swimming. He used to swim in the animal shelter. Hes not too sure about moving water though.

[::Tearstar::]

can you make your history a bit longer? look at the other bios and see what i mean also with your personality please.

[::Tearstar::]

Heather is gonna have to look at this onei dont know what she might want more of or what. so hang on tight and i'll see with her.

[brooktail]

Ok.

[Heatherwind]

Hmm well a good start for your first bio i'll just have to say add a bit more to personality and your good ^^

[<--Tangle-->]

KOOLO A FRIEND FOR HALOPAW AND TIGERPAW > XD

Good job Brooketail

[brooktail]

Thank you!

[Heatherwind]

^^ Accepted*